There is no longer a Hardee’s in Red Oak — it closed years ago — just as there is no longer an economy where part-time ­fast-food jobs are remembered as a stop on a journey. But the biscuit ovens at the Hardee’s in Creston, 50 miles east on Highway 34, are still firing up every morning at 5.… Anne Hull, POST. [Creston]

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CLOTHING

Suits: Napoleon’s (1.2); woman’s (2.8); powder blue tropical worsted suit (1.7); young black man’s dark suit, suit jacket (1.8); pale blue silk suit (2.11); oxford gray (1.9); “dark suit” (2.16); woman’s gabardine suit (1.10); one button lounge suits (2.24): dirty dark suit (young black man) (1.16); woman’s office clothes, dark suit (2.20); oxford gray shadow stripe suit (1.19); black gabardine suits (2.10); card “suits” (2.7); ill fitting Hugo Boss or Armani suit (1.26); dark gray suit, badly fitting suit (1.26);

Dresses: green dress, dressed slipped up (2.18); skirt (2.8); dress and slip (1.3); white sun dress (1.7); nurse’s white outfit, waitresses pink outfit (2.11); skirt (2.16); purple velvet dress, long flowered skirt (1.10); skirt (2.15); “magical” black dress with gold things (2.23); skirt (1.12); skirt (2.2); black velour with silver stitching (1.14); skirt (1.16); skirt (1.16); black dress with gold threads (1.18); sweaty dirty dress (2.8); flowered skirt (2.10); [not a dress but the flower print motif returns on a housecoat and kitchen floor in (1.20)]; black and silver evening dress that needs cleaning (1.24); [“dressed to look like moms”] (2.25); skirt made of hides and leaves (2.22); purple velvet dress with black silk jacket, black gabardine suit (1.26); black dress, purple velvet dress, little black dress,

Lingerie: (1.1); (1.3); (2.5); white brassiere (1.8); “nothing but her slip” (2.11); half slip, brassiere, panties (2.16); slip (2.2); slip, panties (1.16); underwear off “naked beneath her skirt” (1.16); not wearing underwear but a hat and scarf (1.17); her “best underwear” (1.18); a pink two way stretch girdle (1.20); aluminum crotch of jeans (1.22);

Other Undergarments: (1.1); chemise (1.3); (2.5); white brassiere (1.8); slip, anklettes (2.11); brassiere, half slip,(2.16); slip on and off (2.2); taking them off beforehand (2.9); no underwear but hat and scarf (1.17); “best” (1.18); shared underwear, left stockings and garter, packaged of Hanes briefs (2.10); pink girdle (1.20);

Hats: homburg, fedora (1.1); borsalino, baseball caps (1.7); black watch cap (1.8); homburg (1.9); fedora (2.23); (2.1); homburg (2.19); stained homburg (1.15); “hat and scarf” (1.17); pearl gray homburg (1.19); pearl gray homburg (2.10); pearl gray homburg (1.23)

White shirt/ blouse: gleaming white shirt (1.2); blouse (2.8); “white chemise” (1.3); white sun dress (1.7); starched white shirt (1.8); (1.9); white shirt (2.16); snow white scarf (2.23); dirty shirt (1.16); (2.20); (1.26)

Camel hair coat: [2.19]; “aluminum jeans” : (1.22); Scarf: white silk blue polka dots (1.1), “a silk scarf, snow-white with blue polka dots” (2.23); silk scarf, a Christmas gift (“made in Italy, B.Altman’s, the works”) (2.1); “hat and scarf” (1.17); “hat and scarf” (2.25); (1.25). Green Dress: (1.1). Green skating outfit (2.25). black blouse (2.25). Suede Jacket: (1.5); (2.5); woman’s (1.10). Suede gloves: (1.8). Shorts: (1.10).

NAMED CHARACTERS

Al: husband of Janet (2.16); ex-husband of Dottie (2.9);

Anna: long suffering housewife of Jack, mother of Joey (2.18); ex-wife of Jack mother of Charlie (2.6); mutual friend to Clara and Ray (2.3); is she Anna or Cora? (2.17); Anna, ex-wife and/or girlfriend of deceased, “twin” of Irene (2.26).

Bill: stoner musician, lover of Inez (2.13); former husband of Irene Greenleaf; Bill Greenleaf, salesman of the year at Ray’s firm (2.3); husband of Jenny, lover of Inez (2.5);

Blackie: old man (1.7); real name Pierre: husband to Janet, lover of Maureen, father to Clara (2.1);

Carson: married man interested in coworker (1.2)

Claire: wife of napoleon (1.2); “unsettlingly placid” “beautiful” old friend of Inez (maybe) (2.13); Clara (1.4); Clara, Ray’s wife, Maureen’s mother (2.3); (1.8); two Claires who are dental patients, first of which “Claire Page” (2.15); Clara, daughter of “Blackie” (Pierre) and Janet (2.1); niece of Ray (1.13); wife of Napoleon? (2.2); niece of unnamed old man (1.19); is she Claire or Inez? (2.17)

Charles: (1.8)

“Claudia”: (1.3); fiance of Warren (2.21)

Charlotte: secretary then mistress and then wife of Bill(2.4)

Connie Moran: lawyer (2.3).

Cora: Anna or Cora? (2.25)

Dottie: ex-wife of Al (2.9);

Elaine: friend, rival and near twin of Jenny (2.10)

Estelle: (1.9); Al’s lover, (2.9); in list of women’s names (2.25)

Ferlon Grevette: see Napoleon.

Inez: married to Ralph (2.13); married to Ralph, lover of Bill (2.5); wife and nurse of Dr. Ralph Greenleaf (2.15) “Is she Claire or Inez?” (2.25)

Irene Greenleaf: (2.4); mistress of Jack (husband of Anna) (2.8); ex-wife and/or girlfriend of deceased, double of Anna (1.26).

Ingebretsen: Pastor (2.3)

Jack: unfaithful husband of Anna (wife beater, rapist), father of Joey (“slow”), mistress of Jenny (2.18); “Jack Walsh” Janet’s former boss (2.3); Italian ethnicity, wife of Anna, father of Charlie (“cockeyed”), affair with Irene (2.6); son of Janet, grandson of unnamed (2.21).

Janet: cousin of unnamed woman (1.1); secretary and mistress of Ray (2.3); of “Jack Walsh” (2.3); wife of Al (2.16); wife of Blackie (Pierre), mother of Clara (2.1); daughter of unnamed, mother of Jack, sister of Warren (2.21).

Jenny: mistress of Jack (2.18); old girlfriend of unnamed person in San Fran. (1.5); married to Bill (in San Fran) mistress of Ralph [2.5]; associated with Warren and Poppa (2.20); friend, rival and near twin of Elaine (2.10)

[Forgot Joey]

Katy: a go-between between Ray and Clara (2.3)

Marty: Lover of Inez Greenleaf (2.15).

Maureen: daughter of Ray and Clara (2.3); lover of Blackie (Pierre) (2.1);

Napoleon: (1.2); a “young black man involved in the movie business” (or maybe real estate) married to Clara (1.4); “handsome young black man” in real estate business (1.8); a black man –no mention of age– that looks like a bank manager (2.16); (historical figure mentioned (1.12); Doctor Napoleon — young black man– Ferlon Grevette (2.2); “young black man” in a suit (1.16).

Pierre: [missed some here]; is he Pierre? (2.25)

Ralph: friend of unnamed husband (1.1); married to Inez (2.13); friend of Ray’s (2.3); married to Inez, lover of Jenny (2.5); Ralph Greenleaf, dentist, married to his nurse receptionist Inez, with two kids, (later divorced, marries another nurse) (2.15);

Ray: “dim bulb” brother of Claire (2.13); uncle of Clara (1.4); unfaithful husband of Clara, father of Maureen, with mistress Janet (2.3); old man (1.7); witness to shooting outside diner (or shot himself?) (1.11); uncle of Claire (1.13); brother of Warren father of another Warren (1.15); brother of Warren (2.24); Claire’s husband who her sister married? The brother of Pierre? or of Warren? Are Ray and Pierre and Warren all brothers (2.17).

Red Head: [started at 1.8]; (1.8); (1.9); (2.16); with binder (1.16);

Warren: (1.3); old man (1.7); brother of Ray, son of Ray (1.15); brother of Ray (2.24); associated with Jenny (2.20); fiance of Claudia, brother of Janet, Uncle of Jack, son of unnamed (2.21); Claire’s husband who her sister married? The brother of Pierre? or of Warren? Are Ray and Pierre and Warren all brothers (2.25)

Famous: Meryl Streep (2.8); Groucho Marx (2.13); Rocky Graziano, Tony Zale (2.4); assorted Hollywood actors from the narrator’s youth (1.6); Meryl Streep (1.8); John Cusack (1.12); Irene Dunne (1.13); Mickie & Minnie (2.2); Clark Gable, Gregory Peck (2.19); James Cagney, Jack Carson (1.15); Charlie Parker an other bepop era Jazz figures (2.24); movie stars named (2.8); Freud, Jung, Adler, Ferenczi (2.25); Charlie Parker, Daredevils of the red circle (1.24); Snow white, Mickey Mouse, Donald Duck, etc. (2.25); Dick Tracy, Daredevils of the Red Circle (1.25); Moon Mullins, Dagwood (1.26).

OTHER
(mentions of literature, rape, Tarzan, Worchestershire
sauce, New York/ California, Alcohol/ Tobacco, etc.)

New York: Gerritsen Avenue (1.1); Nassau country, East Flatbush, Canarsie, Chinatown (2.18); Chelsea/ Williamsburg (1.2); diner in Bay Ridge (1.4); [Papa Joe’s, Our Lady of Perpetual Help] (2.4); Rego Park (2.3) (?); “The Alpine” (Bayridge?) (1.6); Gun Hill Road (1.7); “he should have met her back in New York” (2.5); Brooklyn, Manhattan, [“Parkcrest West” doesn’t seem to be a real NY location]; Coney Island and the Rockaways (1.9); Central Park (2.15); Daily News (1.11); (New York) Times (1.12) [?]; Union City (New Jersey) (2.1); Sunset Park (1.13); “New York Clothes”, Chelsea (2.2); Bronx, Rockefeller Center, Prometheus (1.14); Rockefeller Center, 5th and 6th Avenues, New Jersey (2.19); Sheepshead Bay (1.15); Rockefeller Center, 3 deuces (52nd between 5th and 6th), Father Duffy Square (2.24); “so close to the park” (1.16); Queens, Con Ed, Elmhurst, Coney Island, Scoville’s (2.9); Fritz’s bar and grill/ Papa Joe’s [?] (2.8); eighth street, the Village, (2.10); Stuyvesant, Bronx Science, Brooklyn Tech. (2.21); Bohack’s (*); Rockefeller Center, Broadway, Vanderbilt Avenue, 42nd street (2.25); Rockefeller Center, 165 W. 46th Street, Three Deuces, Father Duffy Square, 49th street (1.24); list of nine NY neighborhoods which includes Sunset Park, Washington Heights, and Bay Ridge (2.25); The Alpine (Bay Ridge) (1.25); The Alpine, Holsten’s, White plains, Washington Heights, Yonkers (2.22); Whitehall street subway station, DeRosa funeral home (de Riso?)(1.26); same funeral home, Budd Lake (there are Budd Lakes both in NJ and CA)(1.26).

California: L.A. (1.2); San Francisco “land of heart’s desire” (2.13); Los Angeles, San Francisco (Baker, Dolores, Post streets, Capwell’s) (1.5); (2.5); Los Angeles (2.2); Marina del Rey (Los Angeles) (2.7); Riverside Drive, Bank Street (2.17); “In California it’s called copulation” (1.26).

Drinks: cheap whiskey (1.1); whiskey, 7 and 7, milk (2.18); white wine (1.2); “just a drink” (2.8); iced tea (1.3); margarita, vodka, whiskey sour (2.4); “was he still a drunk?” (1.5); “too much to drink at the salesman of the year party” (2.3); saloon that was now a mosque/ cheap booze (1.6); brandy stupor (2.12); (1.7); scotch and water, gin (2.5); coffee (2.11); cold beer (1.9); straight whiskey (2.16); (1.10); milk (2.23); “his alcoholism was prelude…” (1.12); coffee (2.1); half-drunk on New Year’s Eve (1.14); (2.19); (2.24); estelle and the con ed man (2.9); (1.17); tumblers of straight blended whiskey (2.20); Wilsons whiskey; J.W. Dant, draft beer, pink gin (2.10); bourbon, bourbon and water (2.7); “probably drunk, but she may be dead”, a quart cardboard container of beer (1.20); “stopped drinking the way she’d been drinking”, California Cabernet, Hennessey V.S.O.P, Rum baba, strong coffee (2.21); smell of whiskey (1.23); majorska vodka (Ok! soft drink) (1.22); “the fathers would sit with their beer and their whiskey” (2.25); Fleischmann’s (whiskey) and beer chaser, “Tarzan’s World” (2.22);

Cigarettes: chesterfields (2.18); Gitanes (1.2); “smoker of marijuana, hashish […]” (2.13); “can you, she said, lighting a cigarette, get a goddammed ash tray…” (2.4); (2.5); “smoking two fat joints of hash” (2.16); major theme of this chapter (2.2); unopened pack of Lucky Strikes (1.15); “You smoke like a fucking chimney” (2.24); (2.9); (2.20); Phillip Morris, Lucky Strikes (2.8); (2.10); (1.20); (1.21); (2.25); stopped smoking a month ago (2.25); Wings (1.24); Camels, Luckies, Chesterfields (2.25); (2.22).

Rape: (2.18); falsely alleged (2.13); and sodomy (2.11); and sodomy (2.16); attempted (dentist and patient) (2.15); and incest (1.13); mickey (1.17); maybe (2.25).

Pregnancy: (2.13); (1.4); (1.13); miscarried (1.15).

Family of three: (1.1); (2.18); (1.3); (2.3); (1.6); (2.12); (2.5); (1.8); (1.9); (2.23); (2.1); (1.13); (1.15); (2.9); (1.18); (2.8); (1.21); (2.21); (1.23); suggested (2.25); suggested (1.25); (2.22).

Bomba / Tarzan: (1.3); (1.5); (1.6); (1.8); (2.8); (1.22); among other named movie figures (2.25).

Writer: memoirist (1.2); (2.12); “his book” (1.8); gesturing with a ballpoint pen (2.11); (1.12); memoirist (2.2); redhead with black spring binder crammed with tattered pages (1.16); “writer bastard” (1.17); (2.10); (books) (1.21); (books) (2.21); (1.25); (2.22).

Letter/ note: (1.1);(1.3); (2.3); thinks about it (2.9); to grandpa (1.21).

Literary: Freud, Interpretation of Dreams (2.8; (1.3); Marlowe, Doctor Faustus (1.4); “any book that was not what he considered serious” (1.5); carrying “a Great Book through the Mean Streets” (2.12); Pierre (1.8); The Sacred Fount (1.10); unspoken fantasies of the Pulitzer (1.12); Helen and Paris (1.13); Saroyan (1.14); Jung (2.19); “crudely literary” (2.24); Ulysses, Sacred Fount, Pierre, Confidence Man, The Plumed Serpent, Lorca …(2.10); Land of Heart’s Desire (2.13); Hardy’s collected poems and the The Pictorial Key to the Tarot (Janet), Ficciones (Warren), In Cold Blood (Claudia) (2.21).

Worcestershire / Ketchup: Worcestershire (1.1); ketchup (2.11); Worcestershire and ketchup (2.23); Worcestershire (1.18); Worcestershire with what looks like a blood stain (1.20); (1.23).

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HAT BREAKDOWN

Borsalino: (1.7). Homburg: (1.1); (1.9); & “Adam hat” (2.19); stained (1.15); (1.19); (2.10); (1.23). Fedora: (1.1), (2.23). Watch cap: (1.8) (this is the same information, differently presented, as is in the ‘hats’ entry above.)

Looked into this recently, having gotten the idea I was doing it wrong (recycling). I am now not confident I am doing it right, maybe throwing away more than I was before, and more than I should, but I am giving this whole thing a more thorough review.

contamination and recycling: (*) (*) (*) no used tissues or paper towels, no pizza boxes, no frozen food boxes… a lot more poses a problem than I’d thought.

With glass recycling, food does not seem to be a contamination risk. (*,*) [more]

I thought this was an interesting point made by Piketty, that so many people not only are without wealth themselves, but have so little exposure to anyone who is, it makes of wealth something other-worldly and mysterious. One could imagine that this is why various conspiracy theories involving wealth and the wealthy arise. (Capital in the Twenty-first Century, Thomas Picketty, trans. Arthur Goldhammer, pp.259.:)

“For this half of the population, the very notions of wealth and capital are relatively abstract. For millions of people, ‘wealth’ amounts to little more than a few weeks’ wages in a checking account or low-interest savings account, a car, and a few pieces of furniture. The inescapable reality is this: wealth is so concentrated that a large segment of society is virtually unaware of its existence, so that some people imagine that it belongs to surreal or mysterious entities. That is why it is so essential to study capital and its distribution in a methodical, systematic way.”

Vinkensport; triolet; croft; glebe, kopje, Rappahannock river map; hiroshige/ 100 famous views [*] … Melville to Hawthorne letters. I have written a wicked book, and feel spotless as the lamb. Magi.

A Broken Appointment (Hardy)

You did not come,
And marching Time drew on, and wore me numb.
Yet less for loss of your dear presence there
Than that I thus found lacking in your make
That high compassion which can overbear
Reluctance for pure lovingkindness’ sake
Grieved I, when, as the hope-hour stroked its sum,
You did not come.

You love not me,
And love alone can lend you loyalty;
-I know and knew it. But, unto the store
Of human deeds divine in all but name,
Was it not worth a little hour or more
To add yet this: Once you, a woman, came
To soothe a time-torn man; even though it be
You love not me.

(pp.160)Καλλος ανευ χαριτων τερπει μονον, ου κατεχει δε, ως ατερ αγκιστρου νηχομενον δελεαρ

*
τέρπω, delight, cheer. καταχέω, pour down upon, pour over. ἄτερ, without, apart from. ἄγκιστρον, fish hook. νήχω, swim. δέλεαρ, bait (neut. nom or acc.).
*

beauty without grace only cheers, without overwhelming, like bait dangled without a hook.

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W.R Paton. Beauty without charm only pleases us, but does not hold us; it is like a bait floating without a hook.

Herman Melville, The Encantadas:

Its sides are split with dark cavernous recesses, as an old cathedral with its gloomy lateral chapels. Drawing nigh one of these gorges from sea, after a long voyage, and beholding some tatterdemalion outlaw, staff in hand, descending its steep rocks toward you, conveys a very queer emotion to a love of the picturesque.

Tatterdemalion.

“A Wake”
Book 1, chapter 26; Book 2, chapter 26

Characters

1.26 Former love or wife of a man who has recently died (unnamed).

2.26 Dead man (unnamed) with ex-wife Anna/ Irene and girlfriend Anna/ Irene, and ex-wife’s young boyfriend with a pony tail (unnamed)

General Subject/ Plot

1.26: Jealousy,/ envy. While trying to decide whether to go to a former lover’s funeral, a woman’s thoughts revolve around her lover’s first wife.

2.26: Twins, death, sex. Told in the form of dream or out-of-body experience, a man attends his own wake.

Motifs

1.26 “as they liked to put it,” movies, Christ, suit, purple velvet dress, black silk jacket, black gaberdine suit, DeRosa

2.26 DeRosa, pony tail, clothing (purple velvet dress), bluchers, ” as they newspapers put it”,

Notes

Moon Mullins…The “Wakes” especially heavy on the authorial asides (“as they put it”, “as the newspapers called them,” etc.). 2nd: Recalls “Dreams” (in its oddity); The “Familiar Women,” the first “Apartment,” and the second “Homburg” (in its twin-women); the first “Familiar Woman” in particular (for its clothes); the first “Brothers” (for the floral spray). The addition of the idea of patriotism, the President, is surprising. Whitehall is at the most southern tip of Manhattan. 1st: one of the “twin women” seems to contemplate attending the event described in the second “Wake”, in the process revealing her jealousy toward a rival (a jealous which is the man’s in the second “Alpine” and second “Wake”). Her “let the dead bury the dead” rings out against the dead man’s “dead with himself alone.” Just because of the mention of lower Manhattan I’m tempted to explore the influence of 9/11 on this (twin towers — what if this were a sort of parable of an historical moment.) Unlike the preceding, no kids at all in these concluding chapters.

“The Alpine”
Book 1, chapter 25; Book 2, chapter 22

Characters

1.25 No individuals. The children of neglectful fathers.

2.22 A divorced father, his former wife, their child, the wife’s boyfriend (all unnamed).

General Subject/ Plot

1.25: Children neglected by fathers (who are themselves betrayed by their lovers.) Children expected to go to the movies and enjoy them in certain well worn ways and to love their father for taking them, but in the event the father’s more interested in meeting with his girlfriends than with his children.

2.22: A man argues with his ex-wife for taking their son on a special trip when it’s supposed to be the father’s day to have him — but in reality it is probably just as well.

Motifs

1.25 Saturday afternoons, Tarzan, daredevils of the red circle, Charms, movies, “expectation”

2.22 Saturday afternoons, Tarzan, alcohol, movies,

Notes

Another Saturday. What is supposed to happen is that the children are taken by their fathers to the movies, and frightened by what they see and then consoled by the fathers. What instead happens is that the fathers, chasing women, gradually disappear from their lives.

The titles of the chapters seem especially meaningful here: The Jungle and The Alpine stand out as being climactic zones: Rain is the precipitation of the Jungle, Snow is the precipitation of the mountains. The Alpine is a movie theater, a “cardboard jungle” is seen in a movie. (The fathers appear neither in the movies or in the theaters, first Alpine).

Both the “Alpines” seem to refer to the second Cold Supper. In that story the father won’t take the kid to the movies because, he claims, the child is afraid of the movies (whereas, in the first Alpine, the child is expected to be afraid at the movies.) In that story, too, the father blew off his weekly Saturday visit with his son to be with his girlfriend instead; whereas, in the second Alpines, he’s flown into a rage that her mother has made other arrangements this saturday, as a special occasion.

Tarzan, in the second Alpine, is, like in the first The Jungle, associated with drinking: alcohol recreates Tarzan’s world. The simple sexual and marital life of Tarzan and Jane is yearned for. The father’s dwelling on his ex-wife sex life is also cast in relief in this chapter, and the promiscuity of his former wives remains a theme in the “Wakes”.

“Bright, candid scarves” is an unusual formulation and reminds of the “dazzle of candor” of the second “Rain.”

“Rain”
Book 1, chapter 24; Book 2, chapter 25

Characters

1.24 Protagonist (unnamed man apparently dream), guy possibly named “Mickey”, and a shadowy crowd.

2.25 none exactly, but topic of the meditation is Fathers

General Subject/ Plot

1.24: [Maybe…] Religiousness [catholics/ prisoners of love] is contrasted with art [charlie parker].

2.25: a meditation on how completely the bond between child and father is dissolved through time, after so much has been experienced.

Motifs

1.24 Three Deuces, Wings/ Charms, Shoes, Rockefeller Center, Prisoners of Love, black and silver evening dress, Charlie Parker, elevator, rain,

2.25 rain, Charms, Tarzan, Saturdays, Jesus, wakes, cigarettes, alcohol

Notes

Serial film. I’d been thinking of the chapters of A Strange Commonplace as vignettes, but perhaps serials would be more appropriate:

Each chapter was screened at the same theater for one week, and ended with a cliffhanger, in which the hero and heroine found themselves in a perilous situation with little apparent chance of escape.

Daredevils of the red circle. The first “Rain” through its dreaminess seems most evoke the first “In Dreams” but from its allusions (to Charlie Parker, Charms lollipops, The Three Deuces, etc) most to the second brothers. Other familiar items: Rockefeller Center, Prisoner of Love, rain, shoes, lost shoes… There’s something surprising about this chapter’s direct mention of Catholicism, which I think we’re intended to associate with the saintliness of the wife, an idea which is expressed with sarcasm in other chapter. (There’s a mosque in the first “Movies” — the “Born Again” chapters — and the frequent repetitions of “Jesus” as an exclamaition or oath –are other references to religion.) 165 W 46th is by Times Square and St. Mary the Virgin church.

2nd rain: ruined shoes in the rain again, saturdays are the days when the divorce fathers have custody over their sons, and it seems always to be raining. The fathers take the sons to the movies, but would really rather be somewhere else (drinking, with their new girlfriends) and the children sense this. And what do the father’s want, but to be as children themselves when all that was demanded of them was that they be themselves. Perhaps this is actually the source of the “curious sadness” in the second “Saturday Afternoon”:

(…) after all this, the doomed, the hated Saturdays, again and again, the fathers remembered, in a dazzle of candor, the specific moments when the last tenuous links between them and their restless and distracted children began to dissolve, disintegrate, remembered their children in the act of fading away from them, fading into their actual lives: to which the fathers had no access, of which the fathers knew nothing at all and never would.

“The Jungle”
Book 1, chapter 22; Book 2, chapter 17

Characters

1.22 56 year old man (unnamed)

2.17 unnamed woman (probably) (spose it could be a man.)

General Subject/ Plot

1.22: Commercialism. Older or middle-aged man watching golden era hollywood movie is disturbed by blatantly sexual and futuristic commercial for a soda…

2.17: a woman, probably having suffered a traumatic episode, attempts to solve basic questions about her identity and predicament.

Motifs

1.22: Tarzan, cardboard, alcohol (“majorska” vodka),

2.17: bathroom, smoking, tiled floor, raining, black man, detective, (Ray, Warren, Claire, Pierre, Inez, Cora…)

Notes

In the first “The Jungle” the jungle referred to is the “cardboard jungle” of the broadcast of a Hollywood production of Tarzan. (For “cardboard” see first “Apartment”).

In the second, the idea of the jungle directly refers, in a figurative sense, to the extreme confusion of a character who has been drugged (we think of the woman in the first “Another Small Adventure”), and indirectly (I suppose) to the maziness of the narrative itself — the reader has many of the same confusions as the character. (And we remember from that first “Another Small Adventure” that it was that “writer bastard” who had given the girl the drug.) (Perhaps the book itself, a papery representation of something bewildering, is a sort of cardboard jungle.)

Perhaps Sorrentino contrasts here also the fake jungle of Hollywood with the bewildering jungle of real life or of his novel.

The robot, contrasting with the primitiveness of Tarzan, suggests to me the ‘hi-tech’ of the second “Saturday Afternoon” and the specific age given to the character makes me curious too (fifty-six? the eleven of the second “Saturday”?) — santa was selling soda on TV in the second “pair of deuces.”

Like a number chapters (second in the diner, second saturday afternoon) the first jungle involves a man trying to understand an obscure fleeting emotion he has: but I can no more say what’s troubling the man than he can. Is it what troubles the father in the second “saturday afternoon” who was also watching an old movie? (That man had rented his movie.)

“Snow”
Book 1, chapter 23; Book 2, chapter 14

Characters

1.23 boy, his mother and father (unnamed)

2.25 man and girlfriend (unnamed)

General Subject/ Plot

1.23: Nostalgia, dream. A child glimpses through a tunnel of snow an idyllic family life which is soon to end.

2.25: Doomed love. A pair of skaters contrasted with lovers in difficult but undescribed situation.

Motifs

1.23 Grey Homburg, blue overcoat, white silk scarf with blue polka dots, worcestershire sauce, alcohol (whiskey), snow, heaven, magic, ketchup, coffee, another of the book’s “meals”.

2.25 snow, black, green, rockefeller center, candy store, coffee,

Notes

There’s a lot of beautiful, wonderful writing in Strange Commonplace, exact and complicated, but I frequently think of the two “Snows,” along with the second “Rain”, as containing the best.

The first takes us to the action described in the first “In the Diner” and clarifies the meaning of the conclusion of that chapter — the image of heaven involves domestic bliss.

But where the narrative in that “Diner” chapter is given in the frame of a memory or imagining of a man sitting at the diner, the first “Snow” is narrated omnisciently in the present.

The silk scarf with white polka dots has taken on a symbolic force by this point in the book: we know, without being told, that the reason this married couple will separate is that the husband is having an affair, and that his mistress has likely given him this scarf. (This story occurs in January. In another story, the second “Happy Days”, the scarf is given as a Christmas gift.)

Another pattern of A Strange Commonplace repeated in the “Snows” is that of looking at the same situation from drastically different perspectives or with slightly altered premises. An earlier example of this is the contrast between a married woman being raped by two men (Second, “On the Roof”) and a married woman giving herself to two men (first, “A Small Adventure.”) In the first “Snow” we see a person’s happy childhood about to be dashed by an adulterous parent; in the second, we see a (probably) adulterous relationship that seems founded on a real passion, a sincere affection.

(Perhaps the skaters in the rink of the second are the married couple of the first, or their proxies.)

“Saturday Afternoon”
Book 1, chapter 21; Book 2, chapter 21

Characters

1.21 old man, his son and his daughter and her son, all unnamed.

2.21 old man (unnamed); his (probably deceased) wife (Irene); his son (Warren) and fiance (Claudia); his daughter (Janet) and her son (Jack),

General Subject/ Plot

1.21: Old man, befuddled that he is still alive, contemplates his estrangement from his children and grandchildren on a “saturday afternoon”
2.21: After a family meal, an old man, with all he could ask for from his grown children, is still left strangely sad.

Motifs

1.1 old man/ age, saturday, “creative work” of son, books
2.18 rain, saturday, books, old age, brothers, mother (recalls 2nd Another Small Adv.), alcohol, movies (singing in the rain)

Notes

… in the first saturday afternoon, an old man feels estranged from his grown children; in the second, the old man, with a much warmer relationship to his grown children, yet has mixed feelings after an enjoyable afternoon spent with them…. These two chapters are among those that seem to comment directly on each other (they are also placed directly across from each other in the TOC).

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Saturday afternoon mainly discussed in the second “Rain.” I think this is the key passage to understanding both the Saturday Afternoons, from the first:

“Because he had to believe that they, too, [his friends and enemies from the past] were alienated from their children and unknown to their grandchildren; otherwise, the touch of normalcy that would inform their lives, were the opposite true, would destroy him completely. They had to be as strangers to the strange and thankless adults who were their children and who, it had to be, hated them, or more exactly, held then in disinterested contempt.”

The vague sadness of the man in the second refers to this truth intimated by the first: despite the general happiness he feels and its manifest outward signs there’s something opposite or antagonistic to his personhood in this pleasantry, the ‘etcetera.’ (Everything’s going so well and it seems so redundant.) While the man of the first doesn’t realize that it doesn’t have to be how it is for him: that children and grandchildren aren’t entirely ungrateful to or uninterested in their parents and grandparents. (Or this could be the same man, or similar men, at different times, in these chapters. Or it could be the chapters are much more self-contained and much less related than it occurs to me to think: for example, the obscure sadness of the man of the second may mainly involve the absence of the lady of that family, which indeed is in some part suggested by the romantic song references at the end, if they are song references… Or maybe this is two entirely different old men with two entirely different sadnesses.)

Another notable difference is how, in the first, the children haven’t been able to recover from personal problem; in the second, they appear, after had having difficulties, to have achieved a measure of happiness and success in life.

In both, the figure of the mother is absent, though in the second she is referred to by name (“Irene”) and one feels the man of the second must be a widower (if the couple were divorced it would probably not be remarked that her ex-husband was making use of her finest dinnerware, except comically). Books in both. Same time of day, similar climactic conditions (in the first the rain starts at sunset, in the second it seems to be raining for the entirety of the events of the chapter). Etcetera from the second, could that allude to “The King and I“? Is the “so they say” from “It’s Wonderful“?

*
A LONG TIME AGO, A MILLION YEARS B.C.
THE BEST THINGS IN LIFE WERE ABSOLUTELY FREE
BUT NO ONE APPRECIATED A SKY THAT WAS ALWAYS BLUE
AND NO ONE CONGRATULATED A MOON THAT WAS ALWAYS NEW
SO IT WAS PLANNED THAT THEY MUST VANISH NOW AND THEN
AND YOU MUST PAY, SO WE CAN GET THEM BACK AGAIN
THAT’S WHAT STORMS ARE MADE FOR
AND YOU SHOULDN’T BE AFRAID FOR……

EVERY TIME IT RAINS IT RAINS PENNIES FROM HEAVEN
DON’T YOU KNOW EACH CLOUD CONTAINS
PENNIES FROM HEAVEN
YOU’LL FIND YOUR FORTUNE FALLING ALL OVER TOWN
JUST MAKE SURE THAT YOUR UMBRELLA IS UPSIDE DOWN

TRADE THEM FOR A PACKAGE OF SUNSHINE AND FLOWERS
IF YOU WANT THE THINGS YOU LOVE, YOU MUST HAVE SHOWERS
SO WHEN YOU HEAR IT THUNDER, DON’T RUN UNDER A TREE
THERE’LL BE PENNIES FROM HEAVEN FOR YOU AND ME.

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I take the numbering as simply indicating a progression which could be otherwise articulated verbally. However, the size of the numbers makes me wonder if I might be missing something, especially as numbers do appear to carry a symbolic or pseudo-symbolic weight in the book. For example, the first “The Jungle” (which is the story directly after the second “Saturday Afternoon” if you’re reading the book title by title, rather than sequentially, as I’m doing for this concordance”) gives the specific age of the protagonist of the chapter — having failed to share this information in the two preceding, which dealt with old men– as 56, and 5+6=11. That second Saturday afternoon is also the first time technology in any sense is raised in the book (there are no cellphones, no computers, only television sets, record players, phones) and the first “The Jungle” presents a robot on T.V.

To be noted that this is one of several chapters that depart from the novel’s usual narrative structure. Among the other such chapters I’d include: the second Rockefeller Center (a multiply reiterated story); the second “Pair of Deuces” (paragraphs switch between sets of characters); the second “In The Bedroom” (like second “Pair of Deuces.”

“An Apartment”
Book 1, chapter 20; Book 2, chapter 7

Characters

1.20 a woman lying on a kitchen floor of the apartment, a woman outside the apartment drinking beer, identical clothing.

2.7 an “old man” (unnamed)

General Subject/ Plot

1.20: the decor of an apartment is described containing many familiar objects, with a woman unconscious on the kitchen floor and another dressed like her on a nearby stoop.

2.7: an old man plays a sort of russian roulette with himself, using poker cards: when he deals himself a flush, he’ll swallow a bottle of pills.

Motifs

1.20 flower print, unconscious woman, worcestershire sauce, bronze lioness, “prisoner of love,” Russ Colombo, “as the phrase has it”, alcohol, twin women, black teapot

2.7 Marina del Rey, Los Angeles, Cards, suits, Mickey Finn,

Notes

Like the four Small Adventures, the two Pearl Gray Homburgs and The Apartment seem closely related enough to almost constitute their own group. (In fact, there may be other such groups four, maybe all the chapters may be divided into such groups, which would go with the idea of their being “suits.” Going further along with this idea: perhaps the first “Pearl Gray Homburg” and the second “An Apartment” are to be taken as puns on the idea of suits: suits as clothes, suits as cards.)

The first “Pearl Gray Homburg” and the second “An Apartment” involve an old man concern with suits. The first “Homburg” mentions the old man’s apartment while the second “Apartment” gives no indication of where the man is and certainly no reason as to why it should be called “An Apartment.” Meanwhile the second “Pearl Gray Homburg” (which also involves an apartment) includes the idea of twins, which is also suggested by the second “Apartment.” The apartment in this chapter has many objects found in other chapters: a studio couch (like the second “Homburg”), a bottle of Worcestershire sauce, a Philco radio, a bronze figure of a lioness (2nd “Another Small Adventure”), a black teapot (1st “Cold supper” 2nd “In the Bedroom”), an unconscious or drugged woman.

In the second “Apartment” again the mention of magic (the “magical dress” of the second “In the Diner”, the “magical route to oblivion” of the first “Pair of Deuces” etc.) Hoarding pills like first “Born Again.” ‘Mickey’ like first “Another Small Adventure”… I’m tempted to read this chapter as containing hints as to the structure and purpose of the book.

“Pearl Grey Homburg”
Book 1, chapter 19; Book 2, chapter 10

Characters

1.19 Old man (unnamed) his niece (Claire), his wife, brothers and daughter (deceased, unnamed), his son in the army (unnamed)

2.10 protagonist, a literary type (unnamed), his girlfriend (Elaine) his other woman and Elaine’s friend (Jenny)

General Subject/ Plot

1.19: A man returning home has, as he does every time returns home, a renewed sense of his loneliness. (Suggestion that he had an inappropriate relationship with his niece, which he doesn’t repent of.)
2.10:

Motifs

1.19 Homburg (like new), suit, apartment, Claire, son in the military/ over seas, in dreams,

2.10 Homburg (dirty, worn), flowered skirt, apartment, alcohol, literature (Pierre/ Confidence Man; The Sacred Fount), black gabardine suits, women who are identical, infidelity, J.W. Dant

Notes

Both “Pearl Grey Homburg” chapters involve a man alone. In the second, he finds he’s only just found he’s been left. In the first, he’s been alone for sometime. Both feature a homburg. In the first, it is in perfect condition despite being very old and is the possession of its wearer. In the second, it is old and stained (recalling the first “Brothers”) and apparently has nothing to do with the unnamed man who’s found it, who is troubled by its appearance. The man in the first “Pearl Grey Homburg” is also unnamed but he has a niece named Claire, whom he harbors an intense feeling about; which gives one the suspicion that this might be Uncle Ray, who abused his niece, but various details complicate that view (that he has multiple brothers, for instance). The interesting detail is dropped that Claire would be sixty five at the time this chapter takes place if she had lived; so, assuming she had died at twenty three, this is forty-two years later. The man in this chapter seems to view the correctness of his clothes as proof of his own correctness — to dress properly is to be morally well. The second “Pearl Grey Homburg” is more openly literary than anything we’ve seen so far and also presents more explicitly than any other chapter yet the idea of “doubles,” and twins, of which the novel itself is replete of examples — things very like each other, almost exactly alike, which however are not at all the same as each other, or probably are not… A suggestion of “metafiction” here I think: an author unable to distinguish between his characters or find meaning in his symbols.

“Cold Supper”
Book 1, chapter 18; Book 2, chapter 6

Characters

1.18 Wife, husband, mother-n-law (all unnamed)

2.6 Anna (wife), Jack (husband), their son (unnamed), Irene (jack’s mistresses)

General Subject/ Plot

1.18: Like 2nd In the Bedroom. Oppressed wife and mother leaves child home alone to escape.

2.6: Man spends day with mistress instead of family. Returns home to furious wife. Claims he was at movies.

Motifs

1.18 Alcohol, snow, “slow” child, worcestershire sauce, jesus, clothing, a cold supper, 32/21

2.6a cold supper, jesus, infidelity, lucky strikes, movies and actors, tarzan, a mother, smelling of another woman, cooking,

Notes

First cold supper with three steps like [first Small Adventure], [reminds of Dante’s steps into Purgatory but can’t recall how many those were] (chapter starts with wooden stair case and end with brick steps) with woman drinking by herself like [second Another Small Adventure.] Another mention of Paris in the first (“Evening in Paris”) .. “her sweaty dirty dress” in the second, “guinea” in the second like in the first “Brothers” (“guinea bastard truck driver”)… The second cold supper is served on a Saturday, the first probably a weekday.

In the Cold Suppers we see two different responses of a woman to her perpetually late, unfaithful husband. In the one she flees her responsibilities (or, has reached the breaking point), in the second she confronts the husband (or, has not yet reached the breaking point) –not to suggest a moral lesson is being drawn here.

“Silvercup“, question, could the guy in the second “In the Diner” be Joey? (the woman in the first cold supper is described as wearing a black dress with gold-colored threads). If You Could Only Cook is, in fact, a movie. All are from the thirties except for Tarzan (1918). “Papa Joe’s” from second “Lovers.” Cross-eyed Charlie evokes “slow” Joey. Poor Butterfly / *. Interesting how the father puts all the blame on not spending time with his son on his son: he can’t watch softball with the son because the son hates softball; he can’t go to the movies with his son because the son is afraid of movies (can you believe that!); he can’t play catch with his son because how could his son ever catch a ball with that cock-eye of his? Fanny Hurst. Faith Baldwin. (Both popular woman writers of the thirties.)

“Another Small Adventure”
Book 1, chapter 17; Book 2, chapter 20

Characters

1.17 Woman, her husband, “writer bastard” (all unnamed)

2.20 woman (Jenny), her boss (Ms. Neumiller), “Poppa” (her father? a man who scares her?) Jenny’s boyfriend (Warren)

General Subject/ Plot

1.17: A woman, who had been slipped a drug and raped, is found by her husband.

2.20: A woman drinks herself senseless when she gets home from work.

Motifs

1.17 tiled bathroom floor, white and black, hat and scarf, no underwear, writer, vomiting

2.20 vomiting, clothes (dark suit, white blouse, floral pin), “spray” [1st brothers], figurine of lioness with lamb, alcohol, cigarette, wet clothes, soiling oneself,

Notes

All four of the small adventures have women as their protagonists and all four have something dingy about them: in SA1 a married woman feels drawn to be with strange men (seems to want to be soiled?); in SA2 a divorced woman in a kind of glum affair with a married man (the towel); in ASA1 a married woman who has been drugged and raped; in ASA2 a single woman in a dire situation (literally soiling herself.)

The idea that “soiled-ness” (being, feeling dirty) occurs near areas of cleanliness — the tiles in the bathroom in ASA1 are clean, the rather composed atmosphere of the woman who’s soiled herself in ASA2,–the building that is so run down in such a nice part of town (SA1).]

In ASA1, a complex look at the mindset of the victimized woman: yes, she did have it as a thought to get back at her husband by being with another man, but it would have remained a thought if she hadn’t been drugged –and her first thought, on coming out of it, is fear that her husband will find out.

(Reminds of the woman being “drugged” –smoking hash– in the first “On the Roof”. On that occasion, the drug consumption had been consensual but not the sex. In this case the drug made her “consensual” (unable to resist.))

SA1 and SA2 seem to center on “sluttishness”: in the first, the woman seems to take it upon herself, to make herself available to men who are not her husband and are not clean; in the second the woman, having an affair with a married man, recoils from the idea that she has become a slut, which is to be like the woman who broke up her own family.

In SA1 and SA2 and first “On the Roof” sexual entry from rear…. On my first reading of tghe second “Another Small Adventure” I assumed “Poppa” to be a nefarious, maybe pimp-like character. I am now more of the view that he is Jenny’s actual father and that he is responsible for her black lacquered table and bronze figuring and maybe office job.

“A Small Adventure”
Book 1, chapter 16; Book 2, chapter 9

Characters

1.16 Married Woman (unnamed), Young black man (unnamed), man with red hair

2.9 A mother (dottie) her boy (unnamed) her ex-husband (Al) the woman he ran off with (estelle) the man daughter had an affair and his wife (unnamed)

General Subject/ Plot

1.16: married woman, apparently thrill seeking, has sex with two iffy guys.

2.9: a single mother, whose husband ran off with another woman, has a grim affair with another man’s husband.

Motifs

1.16 elevator, red hair, black guy, clothing (suit, skirt), dirtiness, binder (writing?), party

2.9 cigarettes, mother, alcohol, infidelity, towel, linoleum, unhappy

Notes

See “Another Small Adventure.”

“Brothers”
Book 1, chapter 15; Book 2, chapter 24

Characters

1.15 Two brothers (Ray and Warren, Warren the eldest), Warren’s beautiful daughter (name “forgotten”), Ray’s Daughter, Ray’s Son (Warren), their wives (unnamed).

2.24 two brothers (Ray and Warren) and their wives (unnamed).

General Subject/ Plot

1.15: Two brothers share everything but their relationship sours and they grow apart. It’s never stated what goes wrong with their relationship.

2.24: two brothers conduct affairs with each other’s wives.

Motifs

1.15 Ray, Warren, beautiful girl, girl dead at 23 (here a car crash), homburg, lucky strikes, dentist, movies (Cagney et al.) credit investigator,

2.24 Rockefeller Center, cigarettes, infidelity, alcohol, “Prisoner of Love”, three deuces, purple tie, jesus, happy, party

Notes

The first “Brothers” strongly correlated with the second “A Familiar Woman” — Strawberry Blond, dentistry, Oldsmar Florida. It deals with two brothers gradually growing apart. They both have Claire-like daughters, one having died at twenty-three, the other notable for her beauty and premature death. Something dark also hangs over one of these Claire-like daughters, which causes the separation. One guesses it is incest.

The second “Brothers” tells a reverse story of two brothers growing closer together through cheating on each other’s wives, and somewhat invokes the second “Pair of Deuces” both through the mention of “Three Deuces” and the similar situation of two married couples changing partners.

The first is movie-related while the second is song/ music related…. (On the roof, holiday season, three deuces, purple tie, jesus, happy, twenty-five years ago, Rockefeller Center, “Charms“?)… Is there any reason to believe these are not the same Ray and Warren in the two chapters? [There are a couple details that make it unlikely: that the brothers of the first married late, that the given occupations of the two sets of brothers don’t correspond)… What to make of the fact, in the first, that (1) both Ray and Warren have “Claire-like” daughters (one for being exceptionally beautiful and the other for having died at age twenty-three) and that Ray’s son is named Warren? There almost seems a kind of ratio at work… Haven’t seen Strawberry Blond but a look at the plot summary suggests a parallel with these chapters.